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When you walk away
I count how many steps you take
As you leave my life forever.

When you turn away from me
I lose sight of the face I
Once thought was in my life forever.

When you don't speak to me
My heart breaks since
I miss the way your voice sounded
When I assumed you were mine forever.

When you leave my heart
The pieces of my broken heart
Are missing you so.

When you're gone forever
You leave heartbreak in your wake.

I never thought it'd hurt that much
When you left.

Days seem likes years without you.

I need you when I cry
Even though I never though so before.

You're out of my life forever.

You've left me with severe heartbreak.

And the sore truth is.....
I still love you.
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Some content is modified lyrics of Avril Lavigne's song 'When You're Gone'

Heartbreak. This is what you leave behind.
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:iconmirriejam:
Mirriejam Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Exactly how i feel Waaaah! My 3 year relationship ended a few days ago with a single txt message :(
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:icontyler2019:
Tyler2019 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I so understand...
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:iconprincessmiku16:
PrincessMiku16 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
This is the sad truth!
Love it~
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:iconmaikephotography:
MaikePhotography Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Made me cry, it's so true.... great work!
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:iconrayiven:
Rayiven Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This made me cry so hard... It's exactly how I feel.. My boyfriend broke up with me for my best friend and that right there is how I felt when he walked away from me...
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:iconkezio:
Kezio Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Left me speechless. Wonderful work.
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:iconchobitskitty:
chobitskitty Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly how i feel right now
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:iconmackcarp15:
mackcarp15 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
i agree with this piece...
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:iconyoquieropbandj13:
yoquieropbandj13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
so tragically true :(
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:iconpengulili:
Pengulili Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011   Digital Artist
will be reading this after every heart break, and now i'm gonna go and cry in a corner \leaves with head dow
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:icontackyloveapple:
TackyloveApple Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very heartfelt
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:icondelcattiy:
Delcattiy Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011
wo-ow, that was very heartfelt.
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PuppyAkamaru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
man... teenage years is when EVERYTHING goes down, isn't it? love this, man. I totally went through this... I think i still am.. 8/
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:iconcoolpepper23:
coolpepper23 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2010  Student Writer
I like this, a lot.
This is exactly how i feel right now.
Great job!
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:iconcinematicorchestra:
CinematicOrchestra Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Just what I feel.
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:iconcanadagal2341:
Canadagal2341 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
This is...
This is the whole damned truth.
He said forever.
He said he loved me.
But now...
Now it's not there.
This was beautiful.
Thank you.
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:iconrayiven:
Rayiven Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know how you feel, so deeply right now... My great love told me the same.. and now he's gone, leaving only a void...
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nyxsilverjk Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Sad thing is... this happened to me today. I figured out the guy that told me he'd be there forever was messing around with his ex girlfriend behindmy back... felt like being stabbed. Being betrayed, in my opinion, is the worst crime ever committed...
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:iconrayiven:
Rayiven Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Same here.. Exact same thing...
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:iconelfgirllithirnial:
elfgirllithirnial Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
you wrote the words that my heart is crying right now. and you did it so perfectly. its amazing.
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
Thank you so much. (:
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:iconelfgirllithirnial:
elfgirllithirnial Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
you're very welcome :hug:
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:iconmizuki-anya:
Mizuki-Anya Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
that dickhead stole my heart and he still ahsn't given it back!!!!!
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
I feel the same way..
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:iconiizaxel-deidara:
iIzAxEl-DeIdArA Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
Wow. This is really good. Sad, but good.
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
Thank you...
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:iconwitch-child-manga:
Witch-Child-manga Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010
I can relate to this at the moment.
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:iconcarmen16:
carmen16 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
:( that is exactly it...
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Indeed. :(
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:iconmegan-2812:
megan-2812 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2010
thats amazing (L) xx
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
Thank you ever so much.
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:iconbad-girl-yyy-fan:
Bad-Girl-YYY-fan Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
Amazing...a hreatbreak hurts so much :( yes, it hurts when he leaves you and you never see him again...but it hurts more when you get to see and talk with him everyday...
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:iconbye-bye-granny:
bye-bye-granny Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
that was perfect!
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
Thank you. :)
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:iconmcarrera87:
MCarrera87 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
This is a great!... just the way I feel right now... but I know things will get better :D Congrats!
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
Thank you very much. :D
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:iconlau-chan:
Lau-chan Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
awwww that's totally how I feel. Bravo ! T_T
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
Aw. Suck. :/

I hate that feeling.
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:iconlau-chan:
Lau-chan Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
Yeah... me too....
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:iconfriesaregood:
friesaregood Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Great job. This is very nicely written and it really gets the message across. :)
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
Thank you very much. :)
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:icongabrielswift:
GabrielSwift Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2008   Writer
That is me all over at the moment. Very good. I would put a smile but i don't feel like it. :(
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2008
:hug::hug: It hurts. I understand. And I'm sorry.
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:icongabrielswift:
GabrielSwift Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008   Writer
Thanks. I'll get better soon =]
Nice job.
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
:hug: Very welcome. And thank you once more.
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:iconchrissymash:
chrissymash Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2008
Thats great! :-) Although I'm at the 'I wan't him dead stage' now...! I really like it :boogie:
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:iconnickie3333:
nickie3333 Featured By Owner May 4, 2007
*sigh*
I adore it.
Just what I feel.
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner May 7, 2007
Thanks
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:iconxxheavenlymurderxx:
XxheavenlymurderXx Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007
Amazing :heart:
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:iconyoucantunderstand:
YouCantUnderstand Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2007
Thanks!!
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