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Poetry by pink-angel-emma

heartbreak by blackfire-sweetblood

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April 21, 2007
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When you walk away
I count how many steps you take
As you leave my life forever.

When you turn away from me
I lose sight of the face I
Once thought was in my life forever.

When you don't speak to me
My heart breaks since
I miss the way your voice sounded
When I assumed you were mine forever.

When you leave my heart
The pieces of my broken heart
Are missing you so.

When you're gone forever
You leave heartbreak in your wake.

I never thought it'd hurt that much
When you left.

Days seem likes years without you.

I need you when I cry
Even though I never though so before.

You're out of my life forever.

You've left me with severe heartbreak.

And the sore truth is.....
I still love you.
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Some content is modified lyrics of Avril Lavigne's song 'When You're Gone'

Heartbreak. This is what you leave behind.
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Mirriejam Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Exactly how i feel Waaaah! My 3 year relationship ended a few days ago with a single txt message :(
Tyler2019 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I so understand...
PrincessMiku16 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
This is the sad truth!
Love it~
MaikePhotography Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Made me cry, it's so true.... great work!
Rayiven Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This made me cry so hard... It's exactly how I feel.. My boyfriend broke up with me for my best friend and that right there is how I felt when he walked away from me...
Kezio Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Left me speechless. Wonderful work.
chobitskitty Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly how i feel right now
mackcarp15 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
i agree with this piece...
yoquieropbandj13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
so tragically true :(
Pengulili Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011   Digital Artist
will be reading this after every heart break, and now i'm gonna go and cry in a corner \leaves with head dow
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